The vague leaf shadows trembled in the darkened night,
The sky appeared to be plain as if dead,
The silvered moon had become a broadsword stiletto,
Beneath the blinding darkened clouds that seemed sluggish
The air around me nearly suffocated me with a stench of fear,
The rhythm of the night reducing to a whisper, then silence
The abnormal shadows stood all around me like mourners,
Guiding every pace that I made as if escorting a sinful soul
I remained hush in the pool of silence and blackness,
My heart running, fast, then relaxed as if drained,
I knew I had to make peace with my blackened hole,
Darkness was fading all sounds of misery like a pale vision of a moment,
Brief twists of cold breezes flowed softly but cold like a sad song,
But I submitted to the invitation with a palpable pleasure,
This night was charming, dark and deep…………………
In my darkened peace I feigned my wholesomeness,
Until a thin blade of light stabbed in front of me
“The abnormal shadows stood all around me like mourners,” great image in a haunting poem!
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Thank you Melinda! Sometimes our imagination can only surprise us, in a really unforgettable way. Always a pleasure having your most kind comment! Kind Regards!
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you’re welcome 🙂 I am always glad to comment on your exquisite poems. 😀
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Oh! Thanks! Much Appreciated and Always a Pleasure
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Reblogged this on Br Andrew's Muses and commented:
Quite interesting and potentially painful
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That’s i believe is the essence of poetry..cutting through hurt feelings or misunderstandings. Thanks for the visit
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I am nominating you for an award – I shall return
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https://brandrewmuses.wordpress.com/2016/03/01/spirit-animal-award/
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Thank you again
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Wow! Thank you! Its such an honor! Am beyond elation! Much Regards!
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Enjoy your hunt for recipients- I had a hard time deciding but there are some interesting bloggers out there on the way
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Will try my best. Am sure there are
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I love this line “This night was charming, dark and deep.” Quiet your fear and even shadowy, scary, cold places can be beautiful. I often see this amazing beauty in a violent thunderstorm or when I walk my dog at night.
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