At the penultimate moment of that reality
the dead hollow tree inspired a little fabled feeling
they stood midst the green grass inspired a sense of safety
although safety has always been an illusion to any movement
Beyond them, the tall grass had faded into a color of sunshine
life had rained an existential lark on them this time
this very moment was real and alive
so they closed their eyes living it and feeling it
But deep within they knew something unseen waited
they averted the temptation of being at an impasse,
loyal shadows were their companions and greatest confidants
who stood with them in every twist and turn that life presented
The sun emanated a strong brandy from the sky’s distillery
the blades of light ornamented the strikingly shaped clouds
and they submitted to this trance that mattered in their living
because such moments always came with a kiss of hello and of goodbye…
Absolutely wonderful. 🙂
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Thank you so much for visiting. Am so glad you enjoyed it to leave such a wonderful comment! Regards!
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Have a wonderful um. Wherever you are! 🙂 -Time-
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You too. Thank you..I’ll definitely keep writing, please keep reading!
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Okee. I love blog reading n writing. I JUST. realized how much! 🙂
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Its a pleasure having you visit. Thanks!
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“The sun emanated a strong brandy from the sky’s distillery,
The blades of light ornamented the strikingly shaped clouds,” love the images in those quoted lines. 🙂 lovely poem with lovely closing lines.
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So lovely to hear such a wonderful comment from you. Am so glad you love and appreciate my poetry…please keep reading!
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You’re welcome 🙂 I will as often as I can.
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Thanks! My regards in all you do
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Great piece of work. Your choice of words is mesmerizing, “The sun emanated a strong brandy from the sky’s distillery,
The blades of light ornamented the strikingly shaped clouds,….”
Love every bit of it.
The legacy of Chinua Achebe lives on.
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I am delighted and very humbled to receive such a great comment. I welcome you to explore my blog
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