Chaos is at the very center of this universe
I felt it diving with so much vengeance
as if coming to avenge vows not kept
and with it I have had so much experience
at the very core of chaos I found my strangeness.
My eyes are fixed on a distant nothing
eyes wide and alert like those of an owl
my gaze sharp as if with a sinister calculation
as I feel the thinnest sounds of misery fading
instinctively replaced by sweet desperate longings of my immortal soul.
The sounds of chaos carry all the haunting melodies
with eyes as cold with cruelty as time
chaos left the defenseless suffocating under the weight of despair
with the stabbing reality of how wrong things are
rendering hearts bitter with recognition for lost promises.
But midst these trees grim as mourners
and with the silvered stiletto of light softly calling
I let my remaining spirit ride in the crests of a new promises
of the vision throbbing in time inside my laboring heart
Because after all, a single thread of sunshine is all I need!
Aston kamunde 
Your translation of feelings to words is spot-on. It transported me back to a hollow, depressed, confused place… my life before discovering poetry and writing. That single thread of sunshine will get you through the coldest and darkest of times. Best to you, JJ42
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Thank you so much for allowing those words sail through your life. I have waited for anyone to offer me such incredible feedback because that is my exact style in writing. Going through all hurt feelings and finally managing to smile in the end! Thank you so much!
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Stone… The concrete words from the Prodigy of Chaos makes the mind travel in 3 dimensions the past, present, future that without sanity chaos will be another preacher outwitting the Angel in us to the Devil we’ll become through the enticement of achieving peace and freedom.
“Acceptance begins with a start of Anything that jolts the mind most, ” from your aspiration to a better atmosphere “I let my remaining spirit ride in the crests of a new promises
of the vision throbbing in time inside my laboring heart
Because after all, a single thread of sunshine is all I need!” … Sun shine on my face.
Ps: comments from Mash.
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Thank you so much brother for this appreciation.
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